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Developmental Editing

For fantasy and science fiction stories 


From the work you provide, I observe the bigger picture and test the functionality of the plot. I consider the logic of your world including how you employ worldbuilding. You will be provided feedback on where it can improve and where it works.


You will receive a profile on the strengths and weaknesses of your characters. I check for consistency through their actions and dialogue.


You will receive my analysis of the structure and balance in your scenes. This includes how you utilize dialogue and critical plot points.

If you are considering my services, I encourage you to view my recent blogs (especially on Learning from Authors) which demonstrate my close reading ability. 

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